I loved the audio!! Such a delight. Major Dr. Seuss vibes. I will play this for Catalina later. I see a children’s poetry collection in your future, my friend.
It's hard to think of beets as sweet, with all of that dirt flavor pouring through. That notwithstanding, this poem is playfully proud, and you should be proud of it.
I hope this doesn't happen to me. Not even in a dream. One advantage I have over poor Arthur is that my name does not rhyme with any fruits! Do you suppose that means I'll be okay?
Thank you so much Rosa! I hope Catalina enjoys it.
I loved the audio!! Such a delight. Major Dr. Seuss vibes. I will play this for Catalina later. I see a children’s poetry collection in your future, my friend.
This was so darn beautiful, I subscribed immediately. Makes me think Shel Silverstein!
Oh that's so kind! Shel is one of my biggest inspirations. Very humbled to be compared to him.
Well done Zane! I love this children's vibe you have amidst your other beautiful styles of poetry. It's such a quaint gem!
once again, I need my A.A. Milne-esque children's poetry book by you, stat
Your encouragement falls on humble, thankful ears. Perhaps one day, God willing.
Howdy, Zane!
It's hard to think of beets as sweet, with all of that dirt flavor pouring through. That notwithstanding, this poem is playfully proud, and you should be proud of it.
I hope this doesn't happen to me. Not even in a dream. One advantage I have over poor Arthur is that my name does not rhyme with any fruits! Do you suppose that means I'll be okay?
We'll agree to disagree. Ha!
I would guess you'll be okay. I think this was Arthur's story to go through, I'd assume yours will take a different path.
Yeah. My face will probably turn into a carburetor. 🥸
What a tale!
Impressive meter!
Thank you, Heidi.
Wonderful recitation, absolutely wonderful!
Thank you, Mark. This was a fun one.