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Abigail's avatar

This is stirring, Zane. It makes me want to pray over my children and home. There is a kind of holy zeal in these words that is contagious.

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Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Abigail. That encourages me so much!

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Robert Charboneau's avatar

Stirring is the right word. This is drumbeating and thunderous. Well done

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Zane Paxton's avatar

Please to hear that, Robert. Especially encouraging coming from you!

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Abbi Bodager's avatar

Yes, I think "holy zeal" is the perfect phrase. This so inspiring.

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Mandalynn's avatar

Beautiful. Especially the last stanza.

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Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Mandalynn.

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Isaiah Freeman's avatar

A powerful poem, Zane - thanks for sharing.

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Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, and thank you for reading.

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