My wife is deeply a part of me, and she finds her way into most, if not all of my work. My thoughts of her are definitely a source of creativity, and a piece of this sonnet.
Thatās a beautiful observation. And I definitely like leaving room for the poem to speak how it wants to, but the moon was certainly aiding its inspiration.
I really like the word "relished."
this is beyond beautiful! so glad I discovered this page š
Thank you Gala, Iām not sure how you found the poem but Iām glad it touched you.
Beautiful!
Both sonnets are beautifully written Zane!
This is so lovely. Your words are giving me a little swoon this morning.
Refreshing, bro! The questions and thoughts flow serenely within the banks of rhyme and meter.
Thatās really encouraging, glad you enjoyed it!
That's great!!
Love this one! š
I wonder if you wrote this one for your wife as well, because it definitely made me think of my husband and the gift of marriage!
Thanks Rosa!
My wife is deeply a part of me, and she finds her way into most, if not all of my work. My thoughts of her are definitely a source of creativity, and a piece of this sonnet.
"your borrowed presence asks of me", this makes me think you are speaking to the moon?
Thatās a beautiful observation. And I definitely like leaving room for the poem to speak how it wants to, but the moon was certainly aiding its inspiration.
You might like the poetry of Amy Meyers. Here's one.
https://achristinemyers.substack.com/p/secret-spaces
Thatās a huge compliment Daniela. Thank you!