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Abigail's avatar

I can imagine the Wingfeathers chanting this to one another on a dark night. So fun and spooky!

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Florian G. R. Hartmann's avatar

Well-crafted: not too grim to be a nursery rhyme, not too sweet to send shivers down my spine. ;)

A small point, if I might, line 18 seems it needs another syllable.

Loved stanza 7 in particular— that one rolled off the (mental) tongue smoothly.

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