Whoa. I felt like I was reading an ageless poem. The mounting action reminded me of a poem I loved in highs school. I can't recall it now. Superb. And your choice of art captured me.
Wonderful internal rhymes. I didn’t check to see if any of the lines were acephalous, that is headless, but it wouldn’t surprise me with the obvious great care you took in is construction. Cheers.
Wow, Zane, this is really good! Nothing is forced. Everything flows in a natural diction suitable to the subject. And the end, I wish the latter day masters of war would read this and pay attention to the ending.
I did not expect that ending! I agree with Lauren. It is a thrilling poem.
Thank you, Abigail.
Whoa. I felt like I was reading an ageless poem. The mounting action reminded me of a poem I loved in highs school. I can't recall it now. Superb. And your choice of art captured me.
Thank you so much for that compliment, Lauren.
Wonderful internal rhymes. I didn’t check to see if any of the lines were acephalous, that is headless, but it wouldn’t surprise me with the obvious great care you took in is construction. Cheers.
Thank you, Tim. I admire your poetry as well!
This is epic. What a great read!
Thanks!
Wow, Zane, this is really good! Nothing is forced. Everything flows in a natural diction suitable to the subject. And the end, I wish the latter day masters of war would read this and pay attention to the ending.