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Brian Baumann's avatar

I haven't snickered in delight in a while. Well done.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thanks, Brian. Definitely one of the goals!

Sarah Bruns's avatar

Clever 😂

Sierra Westerholm's avatar

Haha nice! Was definitely transported back to childhood on this one.

Isaiah's avatar

Very clever concept and well executed

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thanks, Isaiah. I find the children's poems that most inspired me often have such smart and interesting concepts. I'm happy to have gotten something like that down on the page with this one.

Sandra Rose Hughes's avatar

That is hilarious! I read it to my children.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Sandra! That is the biggest complement you could ever give. I hope they enjoyed it.

Noah Nevils's avatar

This is great. :)

Jordan Elings's avatar

Whimsical, delightful, and inspiring to children who don't share the same skills or passions as their family. Well done.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Jordan. I'm glad it landed like that!