I can feel the swirling autumn leaves around me now! 🍂 Great poem. And love the art too—reminds me of the video game Hollow Knight if you happen to be familiar with that.
Cool Zane! I’m a little late to the party but well done. The art work is great. I liked the creativity of the stanza titles weaving them all together and I think my favorite stanza was the final one - very rich. Well done and thank you for sharing!
"On these streets it's the shadows that show us where to go." Oh my goodness, I loved that line! The art mixed with the poetic tale? You both knocked it out of the park. Incredibly vivid and close. I really enjoyed reading a different style in your voice!
Fun one, Zane! I like the creative direction you afforded yourself—different kind of approach and I think it paid off. Very appropriate for the season!
So good Zane. You did such an amazing job at telling a vivid story through this piece. I really enjoyed it and thought it was different from your usual poems!!
Thanks Rosa! Yes, definitely very different haha. I always enjoy trying to push myself in new ways, and especially when it comes to my writing. It was fun to explore some darker themes of October, and tell a narrative through that.
I can feel the swirling autumn leaves around me now! 🍂 Great poem. And love the art too—reminds me of the video game Hollow Knight if you happen to be familiar with that.
Love Hollow Knight’s art style! And thank you so much.
Cool Zane! I’m a little late to the party but well done. The art work is great. I liked the creativity of the stanza titles weaving them all together and I think my favorite stanza was the final one - very rich. Well done and thank you for sharing!
Thank you Colin!
"On these streets it's the shadows that show us where to go." Oh my goodness, I loved that line! The art mixed with the poetic tale? You both knocked it out of the park. Incredibly vivid and close. I really enjoyed reading a different style in your voice!
I really appreciate that. I had a lot of fun doing something a little different. Thanks for reading!
Fun one, Zane! I like the creative direction you afforded yourself—different kind of approach and I think it paid off. Very appropriate for the season!
So good Zane. You did such an amazing job at telling a vivid story through this piece. I really enjoyed it and thought it was different from your usual poems!!
Thanks Rosa! Yes, definitely very different haha. I always enjoy trying to push myself in new ways, and especially when it comes to my writing. It was fun to explore some darker themes of October, and tell a narrative through that.