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Zak Mellgren's avatar

1. You pick the best art to accompany your poems.

2. You have such a way with words

3. Once again, I commend your reading of your work. It's filled with life and it's such a cool experience to hear YOUR voice as the author reading it aloud.

As always, well done.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you so much, Zak! These encouragements mean a lot.

James Hart's avatar

Very nice, Zane. Perfect for Valentine's Day. :)

B Philippe's avatar

This burns beautifully! ❤️‍🔥

“So blaze and blaze on, but keep your fire in.” ~ ❤️

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

What a profound piece on the whims and beauties of the heart. You've written an almost mythical air into the very essence of human emotion, transforming the experience of feeling into a primordial force permeating through humanity. Most incredible!

Would it bother you if I shared a link to this post and your work in a poetry directory? No credit taken from you. Just a simple link for others to follow to this amazing piece? :)

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Brooklyn. This is so kind. I'm happy for you to include it in your directory.

Mark Rico's avatar

Lovely! Your word choice is both artful and unexpected ... a fitting vehicle for meaning.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Thank you, Mark. I do think unexpected words have a sort of power to them. They can also be a bit dangerous at times. Glad it worked here.