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Claire Adderholt's avatar

Love this Zane! Clayjar review is doing Mirth as their next theme and they specifically requested funny poems, you should submit this one!

Mandalynn's avatar

This is cute. It should be in a book.

Sierra Westerholm's avatar

Haha so cute! Slightly reminiscent of a doctor seuss, just fun and playful and out there!

Lolli Sherrer's avatar

Sheer delight! 🙌🏻

Unavailable User's avatar

This is my favorite of your children's poems so far!

Weston Parker's avatar

Very good, thanks Zane.

Timothy Horne's avatar

I enjoyed that, and I’m not a kid! (Well, don’t quote me on that last bit- my wife might not agree)

Chuck Phillips's avatar

Wonderful! My 6 and 8 year old grandchildren will love this word play!